Siskiyou:
A brownfield... a
dump.
Capped and left for
decades
Composting human detritus.
Here lie the artifacts
of mid 20th Century life
The underbelly now of
visionaries’ dreams.
It’s in transition... a muddy
construction zone.
Broken bits of glass
appear amidst the weeds,
A day-glow plastic
bit and a mud caked fork
Catch my attention.
But for Auggie and me,
this is our happy place.
When we arrive, after
the workers have gone,
After his school day
is done,
He explodes across
the muddy caterpillar tread grooves
And runs "with no hands!"
Right up the steep
sides of the surcharge
For a bird’s eye
view of the land.
I follow, trying my
best to keep up.
We notice what’s in
front of us...the temple’s new roof
The clouds bunching
and rearranging themselves
The leafing out of
the maple trees
And the crows, killdeer, and hawks
Busy in spring rituals,
This is our
playground, our own nature preserve,
And once we’ve had a
good overview,
Auggie races up and down the surcharge a few times
To test how fast he
can do it without falling.
I clap. He smiles, heaves a few rocks
and then asks me to
challenge him
Each week it’s a
whole new course....
Running, climbing,
leaping, and exploring.
*surcharge: It is quite common for designers of
embankments on soft ground to specify surcharge
preloading to
compensate or eliminate post-construction
settlements.

We build with the mud, plant trees in the soil
And then our scavenger hunt begins...
Old things polk out of the ground, amber water trickles
From the ravine’s steep bank
A crow collects nesting material
Killdeer scold us
And run wildly across emerging weeds as Auggie stalks them,
Mallard ducks waddle aimlessly,
And we pause.
We are nature detectives, so we take note
Of iridescent feathers and tawny brown camouflage.
Auggie notices things I miss,
And we share our observations
... a happy team filled with curiosity and fun.
We search for frog eggs in the gelatinous mass
On the fairy pond
And notice sword fern fiddleheads unfurling.
Footprints in the mud tell us raccoons, coyotes, deer,
And various bird species have visited here too.
Beyond the pond runs a cement ditch
Encroached by thorny Hawthorn branches
And blackberry vines
Another challenge for my bare legged boy!

Next we climb out of the ravine
And notice the temple’s latest additions,
A new garden pathway,
Grasses and seedling trees added to the landscape
And finally, as the sun slips to the western horizon,
We head back to town
Where life is different
But also full of wonder
In the eyes of an eight year old.
Slap Line Found on Our Neighborhood Walk
When traveling with Auggie,
I can't stop smiling.







"We are nature detectives, so we take note."
ReplyDeleteThis is a huge topic of discussion these days. The child explorer being a thing of the past. So much nostalgia among those our age for the freedom we had as kids. How wonderful to see the two of you exploring.
Great detail in the writing, too. Bravo!