City Gardener

Dec 2, 2012

"Put a Bird on It" Searching for Portland


 It's December in Portland: rainy, dark, and sopping wet. Clouds sink into the  downtown high rises and the forested parks. Trees are almost bare, and only the crows and squirrels remain. Oh there are occasional coyote sitings and it wouldn't surprise me if bear lived up in Forest Park, but the majority of  birds have left for sunnier climates.

Portland has a silly new motto that the TV show Portlandia seems to have coined: "Put a bird on it". On her last visit, Barb told me about this, and sure enough there are birds painted, embroidered, carved, and  welded in shop windows everywhere we looked! And when someone talks about a creative idea or a good plan, the listener might exclaim, "Put a bird on it!" It's kind of like a high five. Here is a video to give you an idea of what I'm talking about.      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XM3vWJmpfo 

 I have a writing group that meets at my place every Thursday night. After reading a couple of poetry slam poems, I gave the prompt "Searching for ___________" and the writers were to fill in the blank and write for ten minutes. I wrote "Searching for Portland" and came up with the following poem. What I love about this kind of writing is the surprising words that flow when "Monkey Mind" is not allowed in.


Portland

A bird sits on it
in the naked, wet oaks
black, observant and cunning
it knows the street litter as well
as the old buggy man with the gray, crusty beard
hunched and wet as commuters splash
and gutters gush and gurgle
and sheets of rain beat at the windows
and slip in like bad gossip
under closed doors
feeding the black mold that spreads its spores
in the warm crevices of the shower
the old man longs for.
Put a bird on the wet blanket
that separates man from cement,
as falling leaves open the sky
and cloak the street in sunshine.
Put a bird on hormone free, grass fed and recycled
and warm lattés with designs on top
and dollar tips for the jar.
Put a bird on the new-ager
with his titanium lift it with one finger bike
equipped with blinking halogen
heading down Rosa Parks Blvd.
like a dart
racing the pilots of industry all cozy and cut off
in their NPR  BMW cocoons.
Put a bird on the City of Roses where smug, sanctimonious citizens
recycle, buy local, vote liberal, and volunteer
while a fallen warrior
hidden in the alley
sleeps on cardboard by the dumpster
filled with Halloween plastic and discarded costumes
 and cell phones, computer parts and unfinished Thanksgiving dinners
all slimy and moldy and rat infested.
This clean, literate, lovely city
  aglow with Christmas glitz and glitter
and lost souls
who trundle their bundles
lurches
and searches
for reason
in this
the holiday season.
                               Ruth Lizotte 12/1/12




Now you try it! "Searching for ________"  Set your timer and "sling the ink" for ten minutes! (Some of my former students have started a writing group and they named it "Ink Slingers". I love that image!)

5 comments:

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  2. Wow...Ru.."you go girl..!"
    This is really fun to read and so much the paradox of this
    time of year at "our" age...and in "our" age.
    Nicely done!...a/k/a..."put a bird on it!" .

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  3. Whoa...ten minutes, no edits?? Nice!

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  4. "I saw this sad tote bag and now it's pretty, I put a bird on it!"

    Portlandia is ridiculous but wonderful. I love it, almost as much as
    I love Portland with my sister.

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